After writing my script I went down to the recording studio in order to test how my script would read when recorded. On my first attempt I read it out far too quickly and made too many mistakes. I took a small break and then attempted a second recording. Again I was reading too quickly and was told that it was difficult to keep up with what I was saying. On the third attempt I slowed down considerably, but kept at the sort of pace you would hold a conversation with. The feedback from this with very positive however we did have an issue with background noise. In the final piece this will hopefully be eliminated. I would like to add some more voices to the piece as I feel it would be more engaging for my listeners.

Extra column for timings
Excellent narrator/presenter – hook/lead
intriguing and drawers listener in
good use of SFX and music.
Excellent start and experimenting
LikeLike